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“I hastily gathered up my belongings, that I might escape as...” 全部笔记(1) 去书内
1. 标点:“I hastily gathered up my belongings, that I might escape as quickly as possible; the pain was too great.” 中“that”前不应加逗号。 2. 重复:“beside the vase with the white roses, my roses.” 表述重复,可改为“beside the vase with the white roses—my roses.” 。 3. 用词:“make a last effort” 稍显啰嗦,可换成 “make one last attempt” 。
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