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Her husband was gardening in a desultory fashion when she got back home. The daffodils were out. The colts in the field at the end of the garden were tossing their velvety brown necks 去书内
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  • 杨文美 杨文美

    was gardening”“were tossing” 都是过去进行时，通过描述丈夫 “漫不经心地做园艺” 、小马 “摆动丝绒般棕色脖颈” 这些同时发生的动作，营造出妻子回家时的场景画面，过去进行时能很好地体现同一时间维度里不同主体的行为状态，让场景更具动态感和画面感 ，“were out（花开放的状态，类似 be + 形容词表状态 ）” 补充环境细节，丰富场景氛围

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