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Everyone, everyone, has been eager to spoil me;everyone has loaded me with kindness. But you, only you, forgot me. You, only you, never recognized me 去书内
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    1. 标点：分号连接并列独立分句，替代连词，使表达简洁。 2. 时态：现在完成进行时（has been eager）表持续，现在完成时（has loaded）侧重影响，形成对比。 3. 强调：重复主语（Everyone, everyone；You, only you）和用“only”限定，突出对比与情感。 4. 搭配：“spoil me”“load sb. with kindness” 为固定短语搭配 。

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