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-"When" is not a wrong connective here, but there is another conjunction that better conveys precisely this relation of simultaneity: "while."The polisher therefore put "while" in the revision, confident that in this usage, for once, it was irreproachable. 去书内
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    “when”在此处并非错误的连接词，但有另一个连词更能精准传达这种同时性的关系：“while”。因此，润色者在修改中使用了“while”，并确信在这种用法中，这一次它是无可挑剔的。

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